Hi and welcome to my blog. I'm in Totara 1 and my teacher is Mr Wood. We're a class of Year 7 and 8 students in Totara at Grey Main School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Wow Jess this is a very detailed peice of writing I like the bit where you say here I go plonk next time you could make it more detailed. What else could you add???ELZ
This is a very good piece of writing.I love the descriptive words you have used how do you fell about your writing??i think you could use a we bit more detail. from megan
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.