Monday, 14 September 2015

The jump

2 comments:

  1. Wow Jess this is a very detailed peice of writing I like the bit where you say here I go plonk next time you could make it more detailed.
    What else could you add???
    ELZ

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  2. This is a very good piece of writing.I love the descriptive words you have used
    how do you fell about your writing??
    i think you could use a we bit more detail.
    from megan

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.