Friday, 6 May 2016

Week 1 Reflection

My Barn
 In Mumaku we are reading Charlotte web book. We had to make Mr Zuckerman's barn This is my barn that I made.

Charlotte's Web Writing

This is my description of what Mr Zuckermans barn looks like using Simile metaphor personification here is my writing.


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The World’s Most Famous WAR MEMORIAL POEM

By Lieutenant Colonel John McCraIn Flanders fields the poppies blow

In Flanders field the poppies blow

Between the crosses, row on row,

That mark our place: and in the sky

The larks still bravely singing fly

Scarce heard amid the guns below.

We are the dead: Short days ago,

We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,

Loved and were loved: and now we lie

In Flanders fields!

Take up our quarrel with the foe

To you, from failing hands, we throw

The torch: be yours to hold it high

If ye break faith with us who die,

We shall not sleep, though poppies grow

In Flanders fields
Author: John McCrae

1. John McCrae close friend was killed by a German shell.
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1 comment:

  1. Hi, I like how you have all your activities to a high standard and the effort you put in to your activities.


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