Hi and welcome to my blog. I'm in Totara 1 and my teacher is Mr Wood. We're a class of Year 7 and 8 students in Totara at Grey Main School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Hi Jessica. I think you need to do a little bit more work on your summary of your article. Does it make sense? Is it clear? Could I explain to someone else what the article was about?
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.