Friday, 21 October 2016

Literacy Refection T4W2

Literacy:This week we have been doing explanation. web had a topic and the topic was where is you favorite place to go and why. I chose nelson because every year me and my family lie to go there for a holiday. I found this a bit easy and hard. 


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  2. Hi Jessica it's Ayesha here.
    Your writing sounds really good it's a good piece of writing. How long did it take for you to finish your writing?
    From Ayesha

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  3. Hello Jessica,
    I think you did well how you explained why you go to Nelson and what you do at Nelson. I also like how you put it into a sentence and how you explained it well. Next time make the text bigger and more easy to read.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.