Hi and welcome to my blog. I'm in Totara 1 and my teacher is Mr Wood. We're a class of Year 7 and 8 students in Totara at Grey Main School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
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Hi Jessica it's Ayesha here.Your writing sounds really good it's a good piece of writing. How long did it take for you to finish your writing?From Ayesha
Hello Jessica,I think you did well how you explained why you go to Nelson and what you do at Nelson. I also like how you put it into a sentence and how you explained it well. Next time make the text bigger and more easy to read.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.