Friday, 2 December 2016

Literacy Refection T4W8

Literacy: This week for literacy we got to do  free choice writing. I chose to write about going to nelson every year because it is my favorite place to go. I Thought this was an good idea to do free choice writing thought literacy because  you get to write about anything you want. I found this easy because I knew what I was writing about.

Every year in January Me, Mum, Grandma,Granddad and sometimes My  Aunty Jenny, Uncle Graeme, Aimee and Bridie which is my family. We go to Nelson and stay at the tahuna motor camp area where there is a bouncy pillow down the hill and there is a mini golf track where you can play mini golf with your family. We go there every year as an holiday with aur family.

It is really fun when we go to nelson. When we go to nelson we always have to go shopping.Sometimes when it is a hot day we love to go to the beach in Kaiteriteri and also the beach near the bumper boats and the big blue slide. When we go to the beach mr whippey is also near the beach is nelson. There are heaps of things you can do like:  Going swimming, bumper boats, hydroslides  going shopping the big blue slides  and going the the beach to swim.

1 comment:

  1. Hello jessica im a year 5 in yms and i really like your story about going to nelson.But make sure you look at your work before u publish it.


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